Cherly Destra
Mr. Kelly
December 6, 2013
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Friendships are very crucial in our life, because friendship allow us to be dependent on one another. According to “friendship Bond” by Parlee the two main points that are important in friendship are trust and acceptance. I agree with Parlee’s statement, but I also think it is important in friendship when we respect one another. The most ideas in the passage that I feel is especially significant are trust and betrayed.
According to a recent survey in psychology the author mentioned that most of the people in the survey said that a good friendship is when it has trust, honesty, and acceptance, which are “support me”, and understands me”. According to social psychologists, in order to have a good friendship must be open with and trust one another for their relationship to become deeper. However, Parlee also mentioned friends stated to end up with each other because betrayed, and that make them not trust each other.
In my opinion I found betrayed is very awful in friendship, because if a friendship started to be unfaithful to each other’s that could bring them non trusting because in friendship it always important to be faithful to be able to trust one another. In my experience, when I was in High School I had one of my friends that I always I had one of my friends that I always shared my lunch money with her.one day I forgot to bring my lunch money , and at that time she had money, but I didn’t have money. She was hiding from me, so that I ask her some of her lunch money. This story had made me be unfaithful to her because of what she did to me, and I started to break my friendship to her.
In my work place a lot of the people from Colombia where they always share all of their personal life with each other’s. However, they never can’t respect each other’s and don’t trust each other. The reason why they don’t trust each other is because they gossip about one another, and that kept them to trust one another and betrayed one another’s. That is why is important for friendship to have those three elements, which are trust, respect, and be faithful to one another.
In conclusion, according to the” friendship Bond” by Parlee, in order for friendship to successful it needs to have trust, and acceptance. I agree with the author statement, but I think respects in friendship are also important.
Mr. Kelly
December 6, 2013
Clip 3A
Draft1
Friendships are very crucial in our life, because friendship allow us to be dependent on one another. According to “friendship Bond” by Parlee the two main points that are important in friendship are trust and acceptance. I agree with Parlee’s statement, but I also think it is important in friendship when we respect one another. The most ideas in the passage that I feel is especially significant are trust and betrayed.
According to a recent survey in psychology the author mentioned that most of the people in the survey said that a good friendship is when it has trust, honesty, and acceptance, which are “support me”, and understands me”. According to social psychologists, in order to have a good friendship must be open with and trust one another for their relationship to become deeper. However, Parlee also mentioned friends stated to end up with each other because betrayed, and that make them not trust each other.
In my opinion I found betrayed is very awful in friendship, because if a friendship started to be unfaithful to each other’s that could bring them non trusting because in friendship it always important to be faithful to be able to trust one another. In my experience, when I was in High School I had one of my friends that I always I had one of my friends that I always shared my lunch money with her.one day I forgot to bring my lunch money , and at that time she had money, but I didn’t have money. She was hiding from me, so that I ask her some of her lunch money. This story had made me be unfaithful to her because of what she did to me, and I started to break my friendship to her.
In my work place a lot of the people from Colombia where they always share all of their personal life with each other’s. However, they never can’t respect each other’s and don’t trust each other. The reason why they don’t trust each other is because they gossip about one another, and that kept them to trust one another and betrayed one another’s. That is why is important for friendship to have those three elements, which are trust, respect, and be faithful to one another.
In conclusion, according to the” friendship Bond” by Parlee, in order for friendship to successful it needs to have trust, and acceptance. I agree with the author statement, but I think respects in friendship are also important.