Cherly Destra
Mr. Kelly
Sept. 27, 2013
Clip 3A
Draft 3
Hard work is not luck
If I would have to choose, I would say success only comes to people who had been hard working and luck does not play any role. As far I am concerned in order to succeed in life everyone must work hard. In addition, if anyone works hard, they will be successful. Sometimes I heard many people said success can come from luck because of the good things your grandparent had been done in the past. However, this is incorrect because I have a lot of friends that their parents had been done charity for a long time .And luck does not do anything for them when their parents die. First of all, I would like to give example to support my opinion. President Barrack Obama became the first black president of the United State. However, if he didn’t go to school and work hard, he could never be the first black president of the United State. Therefore, hard working is the main point that can bring smile to your face, and make you proud later on. Without hard work there is not success for the future. That is why it is very important to work hard so you can enjoy the future.
Mr. Kelly
Sept. 27, 2013
Clip 3A
Draft 3
Hard work is not luck
If I would have to choose, I would say success only comes to people who had been hard working and luck does not play any role. As far I am concerned in order to succeed in life everyone must work hard. In addition, if anyone works hard, they will be successful. Sometimes I heard many people said success can come from luck because of the good things your grandparent had been done in the past. However, this is incorrect because I have a lot of friends that their parents had been done charity for a long time .And luck does not do anything for them when their parents die. First of all, I would like to give example to support my opinion. President Barrack Obama became the first black president of the United State. However, if he didn’t go to school and work hard, he could never be the first black president of the United State. Therefore, hard working is the main point that can bring smile to your face, and make you proud later on. Without hard work there is not success for the future. That is why it is very important to work hard so you can enjoy the future.